Quotation
Exercises
After having
read the explanation of how to use evidence and quotations in your
paper, do the three part (A, B & C) exercise that follows. Be
sure that you have done all three parts; do not stop until you see
"END OF ASSIGNMENT."
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| Who
was Ibn Battuta? |
Born
in Morocco, Ibn Battuta was the only medieval traveler who is
known to have visited the lands of every Muslim ruler of his
time. He also traveled in Ceylon (present Sri Lanka), China
and Byzantium and South Russia. The mere extent of his travels
is estimated at no less than 75,000 miles, a figure which is
not likely to have been surpassed before the age of steam. He
is a useful source of information on West Africa for the period
before extensive contact with Europe. More
on Ibn Battuta |
Exercise
A:
Read this
passage from p. 303 of the book The Adventures of Ibn Battuta,
A Muslim Traveler of the 14th Century (1986) by Ross
Dunn, a historian at the University of California, and then answer
the 2 short questions that follow the passage by Dunn:
Ibn
Battuta ended a sojourn of a little more than eight months
in the capital in a state of ambivalence over the qualities
of Malian culture. On the one hand, he respected [the ruler's]
just and stable government and the earnest devotion of the
Muslim population
to their mosque prayers and Koranic studies. "They
place fetters on their children if there appears on their
part a failure to memorize the Koran," he reports approvingly,
"and they are not undone until they memorize it."
| Fetters?
|
| ibn
Battuta here refers to iron clamps on the leg; see whole
passage from Ibn
Battuta |
On
the other hand he [criticized] the Sudanese severely for
practices obviously based in [their cultural] tradition
but were, from his point of view, either profane or ridiculous
when set against the model of the rightly guided Islamic
state: female slaves and servants who went stark naked into
the court for all to see, subjects who groveled before the
sultan. . .royal poets who romped about in feathers and
bird masks...We may sense in his reportage a certain embarrassment
that a kingdom whose Islam so profoundly influenced his
own homeland...was not doing a better job of keeping to
the straight and narrow. |
| Where
in the World?: |
|
Exercise A,B, and C follow Ibn Battuta in West Africa. You
can see a map of the region here,
with the location of the various quotation exercises indicated.
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2
Questions for Exercise A:
1) Dunn uses both direct and indirect quotations.
Identify one example for each from Dunn's text. If you are uncertain
of the distinction between direct and indirect quotations, see here.
(Remember as you write papers in college, that even
indirect quotations require
citations.)
2) Identify in Dunn's second paragraph both his
claim and his warrant
Exercise
B
| Want
to Know more? |
| you
can read & search the whole book on-line here |
Read the
following explanatory passage from Dunn, then answer the question
regarding the excerpt from Ibn Battuta.
In the passage
below from p. 294 of The Adventures of Ibn Battuta, Dunn
describes the relationship between Islam, the ruling elite, and
the larger population in the region of Mali in Africa visited by
Ibn Battuta:
Sudanese chiefs
and petty kings are known to have converted to Islam as early
as the tenth or eleventh centuries. Whatever purely religious
feelings may have motivated such men individually, conversion
enhanced their esteem among Muslim merchants, the economically
most powerful group in the land, and potentially tied them
to a much wider commercial and diplomatic world than they
had known before.
Yet the military
and political success of the mansas (rulers) also
depended on their continuing allegiance and cooperation of
the mass of their subjects -- farming, fishing, and herding
people who for the most part adhered to ancient animistic
beliefs and rituals, not Islam. Unlike the sultans of Delhi
[(see our textbook, pp. 19 - 21)], the mansas had
not come to power as foreign invaders, prepared to organize
a state as formally Islamic as they pleased. The legitimacy
of their authority rested to a large extent on satisfying
traditional ...expectations in their public conventions and
ceremonies. Consequently, they were obliged to walk a narrow
line between their urban Muslim subjects, who wanted them
to behave up to the public standards of [cosmopolitan Cairo
or Damascus], and the vast majority of the tax- and tribute-paying
population, which took no notice of [the stricter legal dictates]
of [sharia] or proper procedure of Friday Prayer. |
Keeping in mind the discussion
above by Dunn (a historian), read the passage below written by Ibn
Battuta himself more than six centuries ago and look for descriptive
words or phrases that give you clues about Ibn Battuta's opinions.Then,
use this excerpt to help you answer the question that follows the
passage.
Ibn Battuta writing on a public ceremony in Mali: (this scene also
appears in this youtube video;
if you are having trouble understanding the language below, the video
can help clarify things):
[The
sultan] has a lofty pavilion, of which the door is inside his house,
where he sits for most of the time. . . . There came forth from
the gate of the palace about 300 slaves, some carrying in their
hands bows and others having in their hands short lances and shields.
. . Then two saddled and bridled horses are brought, with two rams
which, they say, are effective against the evil eye. . . . Dugha,
the interpreter, stands at the gate of the council-place wearing
fine garments of silk brocade and other materials, and on his head
a turban with fringes which they have a novel way of winding. .
. . The troops, governors, young men, slaves, the Masufa, and others
sit outside the council-place in a broad street where there are
trees...[They] are the humblest of people before their king and
the most submissive towards him. They swear by his name, saying:
“Mansâ Sulaymân kî.” When he calls
to one of them at his sessions in the pavilion which we have mentioned
the person called takes off his clothes and puts on ragged clothes,
and removes his turban and puts on a dirty shâshiyya, and
goes in holding up his garments and trousers half-way up his leg,
and advances with submissiveness and humility. He then beats the
ground vigorously with his two elbows. . . . Inside the council-place
beneath the arches a man is standing. Anyone who wishes to address
the sultan addresses Dugha and Dugha addresses that man standing
and that man standing addresses the sultan. If one of them addresses
the sultan and the latter [the Sultan] replies, [the person before
the Sultan] uncovers the clothes from his back and sprinkles dust
on his head and back, like one washing himself with water. I used
to marvel how their eyes did not become blinded.
. .This is good manners among them.
Question
for Exercise B:
Useful
Hints ! |
| think
about what was sufficiently different, surprising, or remarkable
in Mali for Ibn Battuta that he felt compelled to describe it.
Look for words that suggest he finds what he is viewing as outside
his cultural experience. Remember that Ibn Battuta thought of
himself as having lived a proper Muslim life in his birth place
Morocco. Ibn Battuta's word choice will
also be useful in writing your warrant |
Write a paragraph that
responds to this question:
USING
ONLY THE EVIDENCE FROM IBN BATTUTA, how can the evidence
be interpreted to demonstrate that the rulers of Mali tempered
their Islamicism with local West African cultural practices?
(you should NOT
use evidence or information from any other source; limit
your analysis to what can be extrapolated
from Ibn Battuta's words -- everything you need is there, I
promise. Do not use evidence from Dunn.)
Some writing instructions:
1) Your paragraph should
begin with your claim, followed by evidence
from Ibn Battuta in the form of direct
quotations, and end with a warrant that
explains how the evidence is relevant to your claim.
2) Your quotation(s) from
Ibn Battuta should be no more than 10 words and preferable MUCH shorter
-- if you are unsure how to omit unnecessary information from
a quotation, see here. (very
useful)
3) Be sure to explain to your
reader in your warrant why you think you know that a specific practice
is of local origin or not (see hint
in box to right).
4) You must label
your claim/evidence/warrant structure: put a (CL) before your claim,
a (EV) before your evidence, and a (WA) before your warrant.
5) Make
sure your warrant explains how and why your evidence demonstrates
your claim; your warrant should NOT merely
repeat your claim. 75% of
your score for Exercise B will be based on the strength of your warrant.
6) If you
want to see an example from a student paper of a paragraph organized
around Cl/EV/WA, see here.
Below is one way
sample you might organize this paragraph. You are, however, obviously
free to organize your paragraph in any way that makes sense to you.
The "____" in the text indicates where you would supply
your own writing on that topic. Likewise, (cl),(ev),
(wa) are the tags identifying what follows
as the claim, evidence, or warrant for the paragraph. You will want
to include such tags in your own paragraph.
|
Note:
if you don't identify your claim/evidence/warrant, you risk losing
points for this activity |
(cl)Ibn
Batuttuta found in Mali rulers who integrated local West African
cultural practices into their practice of Islam. (ev)For
example, Ibn Battuta wrote___put evidence here__________________.
We can conclude that such rituals were of local Malian rather than
Islamic origin because____put warrant here_______________.
Useful
Hints ! |
| CHECK
YOUR OWN WORK BEFORE FRITZ GRADES IT!:
Ask yourself if your warrant explains HOW and WHY
your evidence demonstrates your claim.
Remember that 75% of your grade here depends on the quality
of your warrant
|
Exercise C:
Background:
On February 27, 1353, Ibn Battuta
left the court of Mansâ Sulaymân described above and headed
to the African city of Timbuktu (not yet the famous site of learning
revealed in these ancient manuscripts).
There, he boarded a canoe with his small camel, and traveled the famous
African river, the Niger, to Goa, where the local commander presented
him with a young slave boy as a gift. From Goa, he traveled to the
oasis town of Takadda by land (see map).
Read the passage below by Ibn Battuta from his accounts and answer
the question that follows.
The
people of Takadda carry on no business but trading. Every year they
travel to Egypt and bring from there everything there is in the country
by way of fine cloths and other things. For its people ease of life
and ample condition are supreme; they vie [vie: verb, meaning to compete]
with one another in the number of male and female slaves they own—as
likewise do the people of Mali and Iwalatan. They do not sell educated
women-slaves, except very rarely and at a great price.
…There
is a copper mine outside Takadda. The people dig for it in the earth,
bring it to the town, and smelt it in their houses. This [difficult
work] is done by their male and female slaves. When they have smelted
it into red copper, they make it into rods about the length of a
span and a half: some are of fine gauge and some thick. The thick
are sold at the rate of four hundred rods for a mithqal
[A unit of weight, equivalent to a little over 3 1/2 grams, used
in reference to quantities of gold or silver for various purposes]
of gold, the fine for six or seven hundred to the mithqal it
is their means of exchange. They buy meat and firewood with the
fine rods: they buy male and female slaves, millet, ghee, and wheat
with the thick. Copper is carried from there to the city of Kubar
(Gobir) in the land of the unbelievers, to Zaghay and to the country
of Barnu (Bornu) which is at a distance of forty days from Takadda.
Its people are Muslim; they have a king whose name is Idris, who
does not appear before the people nor speak to them except from
behind a curtain. From this country are brought beautiful slave
women and eunuchs and heavy fabrics.
Question
for Exercise C:
Useful
Hints ! |
(A)
By social prestige value,
I mean here the ways in which holding enslaved persons was thought
to bring prestige to their owners, in the same way that some people
now believe owning an expensive car or expensive jewelry brings
social status or prestige
(B) by economic
function, I mean the role slaves played in the
production of goods that could be sold on the marke |
Write a paragraph that
responds to this question:
How
can the evidence from Ibn Battuta above be interpreted to demonstrate
the economic function as well as the
social prestige value of slaves within many West African societies
at this time?
Some writing instructions:
1) Your paragraph should
begin with your claim, followed by evidence
from Ibn Battuta in the form of direct
quotations, and end with a warrant that
explains how the evidence is relevant to your claim.
2) Your quotation(s) from
Ibn Battuta should be no more than 10 words and
preferable MUCH shorter -- if you are unsure how to omit unnecessary
information from a quotation, see here.
(very useful)
3) Finally, you
must label your claim/evidence/warrant structure: put a (CL) before
your claim, a (EV) before your evidence, and a (WA) before your warrant.
4) Make
sure your warrant explains how and why your evidence demonstrates
your claim; your warrant should NOT merely
repeat your claim. 75% of
your score for Exercise C will be based on the strength of your warrant.
If you
want to see an example from a student paper of a paragraph organized
around Cl/EV/WA, see here.
|
Note:
if you don't identify your claim/evidence/warrant, you risk losing
points for this activity |
Below
is one way sample you might organize this paragraph. You are, however,
obviously free to organize your paragraph in any way that makes sense
to you.
The ____ in the text below indicates where you would supply your own
writing on that topic. Likewise, (cl),(ev),
(wa) are the tags identifying what follows
as the claim, evidence, or warrant for the paragraph. You will want
to include such tags in your own paragraph.
(cl)
From Ibn Battuta's writing we can conclude that slaves not only
served
an economic function by ______(put slaves'
economic function
here)____, but also served a social function by ____(put
slaves' social
prestige value here)_____. Ibn Battuta presented evidence
as to the
economic role of slaves when he noted that in Takadda (ev)
______(put quotation "A" here)___. We can
know from this the economic
role of slaves from this because,(wa) _____(put
warrant for quotation "A"
here )____ (ev) But slaves also
served a social function. Ibn Battuta observed
Useful
Hints ! |
| CHECK
YOUR OWN WORK BEFORE FRITZ GRADES IT!:
Ask yourself if your warrant explains HOW and WHY
your evidence demonstrates your claim.
Remember that 75% of your grade here depends on the
quality of your warrant. |
the social prestige
ownership of slaves brought their masters when
he observed, ___(put
quotation "B" here)___.
(wa)____(put warrant
for quotation
"B" here)______.
Postscript: According to his travel narrative, on September 11th,
1353 (almost exactly 651 years ago andnearly
a century before the first European voyage to the West African coast)
Ibn Battuta left Takadda in the company of a large camel caravan
transporting 600 enslaved African women for what is now the African
country of Morocco. Those slaves probably originated in the savanna
lands south of Takadda. This region lacked the copper of Takadda
and so the inhabitants traded extensively in enslaved persons to
acquire the goods they desired. Once in Sijilmasa or Fez, the enslaved
women would likely be sold into service as either domestic or sexual
slaves (Islamic law permits men to own sexual slaves -- sometimes
mistakenly referred to in in the West as "concubines"
-- in any number; however, this practice is exceedingly rare now
and generally outlawed in Muslim countries) for the urban elite
in those African cities.
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OF ASSIGNMENT"
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