QUOTATION
EXERCISES
(class 3, Homework 3)
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Quotation
Exercises
After
having read the explanation of how to use evidence and quotations
in your paper, do the three part (A, B & C) exercise that
follows. Be sure that you have done all three parts; do
not stop until you see "END OF ASSIGNMENT."
Be sure to contact Prof. Umbach if
you have any questions
Who
was Ibn Battuta? |
Born
in Morocco, Ibn Battuta was the only medieval traveler
who is known to have visited the lands of every Muslim
ruler of his time. He also traveled in Ceylon (present
Sri Lanka), China and Byzantium and South Russia. The
mere extent of his travels is estimated at no less than
75,000 miles, a figure which is not likely to have been
surpassed before the age of steam. He is a useful source
of information on West Africa for the period before extensive
contact with Europe. More on
Ibn Battuta |
Exercise
A:
Read
this passage from p. 303 of the book The Adventures of
Ibn Battuta, A Muslim Traveler of the 14th Century (1986)
by Ross Dunn, a historian at the University of California,
and then answer the 2 short questions that follow the passage
by Dunn:
Ibn
Battuta ended a sojourn of a little more than eight
months in the capital in a state of ambivalence over
the qualities of Malian culture. On the one hand,
he respected [the ruler's] just and stable government
and the earnest devotion of the Muslim
population to their mosque prayers and Koranic studies.
"They place fetters on their children if there
appears on their part a failure to memorize the Koran,"
he reports approvingly, "and they are not undone
until they memorize it."
Fetters?
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ibn
Battuta here refers to iron clamps on the leg;
see whole passage
from Ibn Battuta |
On
the other hand he [criticized] the Sudanese severely
for practices obviously based in [their cultural]
tradition but were, from his point of view, either
profane or ridiculous when set against the model of
the rightly guided Islamic state: female slaves and
servants who went stark naked into the court for all
to see, subjects who groveled before the sultan. .
.royal poets who romped about in feathers and bird
masks...We may sense in his reportage a certain embarrassment
that a kingdom whose Islam so profoundly influenced
his own homeland...was not doing a better job of keeping
to the straight and narrow. |
Where
in the World?: |
Exercise A,B, and C follow Ibn Battuta in West Africa.
You can see a map of the region here,
with the location of the various quotation exercises
indicated. |
2
Questions for Exercise A:
1) Dunn uses both direct and indirect quotations.
Identify one example for each from Dunn's text. If you are
uncertain of the distinction between direct and indirect quotations,
see here.
(Remember as you write papers in college, that even
indirect quotations
require citations.)
2) Identify in Dunn's second paragraph both
his claim and his warrant
Exercise
B
Want
to Know more? |
you
can read & search the whole book on-line here |
Read
the following explanatory passage from Dunn, then answer the
question regarding the excerpt from Ibn Battuta.
In
the passage below from p. 294 of The Adventures of Ibn
Battuta, Dunn describes the relationship between Islam,
the ruling elite, and the larger population in the region
of Mali in Africa visited by Ibn Battuta:
Sudanese
chiefs and petty kings are known to have converted to
Islam as early as the tenth or eleventh centuries. Whatever
purely religious feelings may have motivated such men
individually, conversion enhanced their esteem among
Muslim merchants, the economically most powerful group
in the land, and potentially tied them to a much wider
commercial and diplomatic world than they had known
before.
Yet the
military and political success of the mansas
(rulers) also depended on their continuing allegiance
and cooperation of the mass of their subjects -- farming,
fishing, and herding people who for the most part adhered
to ancient animistic beliefs and rituals, not Islam.
Unlike the sultans of Delhi [(see our textbook, pp.
19 - 21)], the mansas had not come to power
as foreign invaders, prepared to organize a state as
formally Islamic as they pleased. The legitimacy of
their authority rested to a large extent on satisfying
traditional ...expectations in their public conventions
and ceremonies. Consequently, they were obliged to walk
a narrow line between their urban Muslim subjects, who
wanted them to behave up to the public standards of
[cosmopolitan Cairo or Damascus], and the vast majority
of the tax- and tribute-paying population, which took
no notice of [the stricter legal dictates] of [sharia]
or proper procedure of Friday Prayer. |
Keeping in mind the
discussion above by Dunn (a historian), read the passage below
written by Ibn Battuta himself more than six centuries ago and
look for descriptive words or phrases that give you clues about
Ibn Battuta's opinions.Then, use this excerpt to help you answer
the question that follows the passage.
Ibn Battuta writing on a public ceremony in Mali: (this scene
also appears in this youtube video;
if you are having trouble understanding the language below,
the video can help clarify things):
[The
sultan] has a lofty pavilion, of which the door is inside
his house, where he sits for most of the time. . . . There
came forth from the gate of the palace about 300 slaves, some
carrying in their hands bows and others having in their hands
short lances and shields. . . Then two saddled and bridled
horses are brought, with two rams which, they say, are effective
against the evil eye. . . . Dugha, the interpreter, stands
at the gate of the council-place wearing fine garments of
silk brocade and other materials, and on his head a turban
with fringes which they have a novel way of winding. . . .
The troops, governors, young men, slaves, the Masufa, and
others sit outside the council-place in a broad street where
there are trees...[They] are the humblest of people before
their king and the most submissive towards him. They swear
by his name, saying: “Mansâ Sulaymân kî.”
When he calls to one of them at his sessions in the pavilion
which we have mentioned the person called takes off his clothes
and puts on ragged clothes, and removes his turban and puts
on a dirty shâshiyya, and goes in holding up his garments
and trousers half-way up his leg, and advances with submissiveness
and humility. He then beats the ground vigorously with his
two elbows. . . . Inside the council-place beneath the arches
a man is standing. Anyone who wishes to address the sultan
addresses Dugha and Dugha addresses that man standing and
that man standing addresses the sultan. If one of them addresses
the sultan and the latter [the Sultan] replies, [the person
before the Sultan] uncovers the clothes from his back and
sprinkles dust on his head and back, like one washing himself
with water. I used to marvel how their eyes
did not become blinded. . .This is good manners among them.
Question
for Exercise B:
Useful
Hints ! |
think
about what was sufficiently different, surprising, or remarkable
in Mali for Ibn Battuta that he felt compelled to describe
it. Look for words that suggest he finds what he is viewing
as outside his cultural experience. Remember that Ibn Battuta
thought of himself as having lived a proper Muslim life
in his birth place Morocco. Ibn Battuta's word choice will
also be useful in writing your warrant |
Write a paragraph
that responds to this question:
USING
ONLY THE EVIDENCE FROM IBN BATTUTA, how can the evidence
be interpreted to demonstrate that the rulers of Mali tempered
their Islamicism with local West African cultural practices?
(you should NOT
use evidence or information from any other source; limit
your analysis to what can be extrapolated
from Ibn Battuta's words -- everything you need is there,
I promise. Do not use evidence from Dunn.)
Some writing instructions:
1) Your paragraph
should begin with your claim, followed
by evidence from Ibn Battuta in the form of direct
quotations, and end with a warrant
that explains how the evidence is relevant to your claim.
2) Your quotation(s)
from Ibn Battuta should be no more than 10 words and preferable
MUCH shorter -- if you are unsure how to omit unnecessary information
from a quotation, see here.
(very useful)
3) Be sure to explain
to your reader in your warrant why you think you know that a
specific practice is of local origin or not
(see hint in box to right).
4) You must
label your claim/evidence/warrant structure: put a (CL) before
your claim, a (EV) before your evidence, and a (WA) before your
warrant.
5) Make
sure your warrant explains how and why your evidence demonstrates
your claim; your warrant should NOT
merely repeat your claim.
75% of your score for Exercise B will
be based on the strength of your warrant.
6)
If you want to see an example from a student paper of a paragraph
organized around Cl/EV/WA, see here.
Below is one
way sample you might organize this paragraph. You are, however,
obviously free to organize your paragraph in any way that makes
sense to you.
The "____" in the text indicates where you would supply
your own writing on that topic. Likewise, (cl),(ev),
(wa) are the tags identifying what follows
as the claim, evidence, or warrant for the paragraph. You will
want to include such tags in your own paragraph.
Note:
if you don't identify your claim/evidence/warrant, you risk
losing points for this activity |
(cl)Ibn
Batuttuta found in Mali rulers who integrated local West African
cultural practices into their practice of Islam. (ev)For
example, Ibn Battuta wrote___put evidence here__________________.
We can conclude that such rituals were of local Malian rather
than Islamic origin because____put warrant here_______________.
Useful
Hints ! |
CHECK
YOUR OWN WORK BEFORE FRITZ GRADES IT!:
Ask yourself if your warrant explains HOW and
WHY your evidence demonstrates your claim.
Remember that 75% of your grade here depends on
the quality of your warrant
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Exercise
C:
Background:
On February 27, 1353, Ibn
Battuta left the court of Mansâ Sulaymân described
above and headed to the African city of Timbuktu (not yet the
famous site of learning revealed in these ancient
manuscripts). There, he boarded a canoe with his small camel,
and traveled the famous African river, the Niger, to Goa, where
the local commander presented him with a young slave boy as
a gift. From Goa, he traveled to the oasis town of Takadda by
land (see map).
Read the passage below by Ibn Battuta from his accounts and
answer the question that follows.
The
people of Takadda carry on no business but trading. Every year
they travel to Egypt and bring from there everything there is
in the country by way of fine cloths and other things. For its
people ease of life and ample condition are supreme; they vie
[vie: verb, meaning to compete] with one another in the number
of male and female slaves they own—as likewise do the
people of Mali and Iwalatan. They do not sell educated women-slaves,
except very rarely and at a great price.
…There
is a copper mine outside Takadda. The people dig for it in
the earth, bring it to the town, and smelt it in their houses.
This [difficult work] is done by their male and female slaves.
When they have smelted it into red copper, they make it into
rods about the length of a span and a half: some are of fine
gauge and some thick. The thick are sold at the rate of four
hundred rods for a mithqal [A unit of weight, equivalent
to a little over 3 1/2 grams, used in reference to quantities
of gold or silver for various purposes] of gold, the fine
for six or seven hundred to the mithqal it is their
means of exchange. They buy meat and firewood with the fine
rods: they buy male and female slaves, millet, ghee, and wheat
with the thick. Copper is carried from there to the city of
Kubar (Gobir) in the land of the unbelievers, to Zaghay and
to the country of Barnu (Bornu) which is at a distance of
forty days from Takadda. Its people are Muslim; they have
a king whose name is Idris, who does not appear before the
people nor speak to them except from behind a curtain. From
this country are brought beautiful slave women and eunuchs
and heavy fabrics.
Question
for Exercise C:
Useful
Hints ! |
(A)
By social prestige value,
I mean here the ways in which holding enslaved persons was
thought to bring prestige to their owners, in the same way
that some people now believe owning an expensive car or
expensive jewelry brings social status or prestige
(B) by economic
function, I mean the role slaves played
in the production of goods that could be sold on the marke |
Write a paragraph
that responds to this question:
How
can the evidence from Ibn Battuta above be interpreted to demonstrate
the economic function as well as
the social prestige value of slaves within many West African
societies at this time?
Some writing instructions:
1) Your paragraph
should begin with your claim, followed
by evidence from Ibn Battuta in the form of direct
quotations, and end with a warrant
that explains how the evidence is relevant to your claim.
2) Your quotation(s)
from Ibn Battuta should be no more than
10 words and preferable MUCH shorter -- if you are unsure
how to omit unnecessary information from a quotation,
see here. (very
useful)
3) Finally,
you must label your claim/evidence/warrant structure: put a
(CL) before your claim, a (EV) before your evidence, and a (WA)
before your warrant.
4) Make
sure your warrant explains how and why your evidence demonstrates
your claim; your warrant should NOT
merely repeat your claim.
75% of your score for Exercise C will
be based on the strength of your warrant.
If you want to see an example from a student paper of a paragraph
organized around Cl/EV/WA, see here.
Note:
if you don't identify your claim/evidence/warrant, you risk
losing points for this activity |
Below
is one way sample you might organize this paragraph. You are,
however, obviously free to organize your paragraph in any way
that makes sense to you.
The ____ in the text below indicates where you would supply
your own writing on that topic. Likewise, (cl),(ev),
(wa) are the tags identifying what follows
as the claim, evidence, or warrant for the paragraph. You will
want to include such tags in your own paragraph.
(cl)
From Ibn Battuta's writing we can conclude that slaves not
only served
an economic function by ______(put
slaves' economic function
here)____, but also served a social function by
____(put slaves' social
prestige value here)_____. Ibn Battuta presented
evidence as to the
economic role of slaves when he noted that in Takadda (ev)
______(put quotation "A" here)___.
We can know from this the economic
role of slaves from this because,(wa)
_____(put warrant for quotation "A"
here )____ (ev) But slaves
also served a social function. Ibn Battuta observed
Useful
Hints ! |
CHECK
YOUR OWN WORK BEFORE FRITZ GRADES IT!:
Ask yourself if your warrant explains HOW
and WHY your evidence demonstrates your claim.
Remember that 75% of your grade here depends
on the quality of your warrant. |
the social prestige
ownership of slaves brought their masters when
he observed, ___(put
quotation "B" here)___.
(wa)____(put warrant
for quotation
"B" here)______.
Postscript: According to his travel narrative, on September
11th, 1353 (almost exactly 651 years ago andnearly
a century before the first European voyage to the West African
coast) Ibn Battuta left Takadda in the company of a large
camel caravan transporting 600 enslaved African women for
what is now the African country of Morocco. Those slaves probably
originated in the savanna lands south of Takadda. This region
lacked the copper of Takadda and so the inhabitants traded
extensively in enslaved persons to acquire the goods they
desired. Once in Sijilmasa or Fez, the enslaved women would
likely be sold into service as either domestic or sexual slaves
(Islamic law permits men to own sexual slaves -- sometimes
mistakenly referred to in in the West as "concubines"
-- in any number; however, this practice is exceedingly rare
now and generally outlawed in Muslim countries) for the urban
elite in those African cities.
"END
OF ASSIGNMENT"
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